I'm Impressed
"Heavy traffic, vehicles competing with each other on who can honk the loudest, everyone around staring at their watches and I'm jobless in this bus..."
"My god!!! what was that sound, If someone could give me a remote control I would mute all these noises"
"I will at least try and get some sleep"
"I grew up so soon, I don't even remember my childhood, all I remember is going to school, college and work. I think that is the reason I'm enjoying my two beautiful daughters childhood so much. Akriti is so matured, she does all her work without anyone's intervention. But I'm scared of Jenny, such a naughty girl. That monster is just 5 year old , and she gets angry when we call her with her name 'Janaki' and insists us to call her as Jenny. May be corporate schools culture. Every weekend we make it a point that we all sleep in the living room, watching movies on the big LCD TV. Children busy watching TV and me trying to steal a kiss from my gorgeous angel Surabhi, without my children noticing it. "
"When I look back at the days passed, I can only remember how much I begged her dad to get us married. I saw her for the first time at a medical camp, and I was a volunteer there. I remember intentionally hurting myself and approaching her for first aid. Then while treating me, she asked how I was feeling, I slipped my tongue and replied very hot, listening to that she kissed on my forehead with her reflex hammer, which turned out to be the identification mark in my passport. She hit really hard. What made me fall in love with her again was that she gave first aid for that too.
After that incident, i saw her after two years near my home, she had set up a clinic, I approached her, luckily she remembered me(how will anyone forget someone after that incident) , apologized her and then like movies impressed her , proposed her, her mother, her brother and then proposed her father, finally married Surbhi.
In our 14 years of happily married, happy life with just one repenting moment of scolding her for ignoring her health never did we regret.
I wish the rose could know,
I would never say you no,
No matter what u ask for,
And travel how far,
I would always be right behind you,
Because I love to see the world after you see,
No matter what you see appears beautiful to me...
Love you Surbhi,
Love you Akriti, Jenny, Dad, Mom
By the gods gacre, I wish hjjn gfxyook mmnjo....."
Surabhi's eyes were filled with tears.
The doctor intervened in between "We have extracted so many people's last few thoughts before they had their final breath, but your husband's was the most peaceful of them all. I'm sorry Mrs.Surabhi Akhil" and took leave from the place.
Surbhi thanked the medical advancement for at least she was fortunate to know her husband thoughts after his unfortunate death and had few words for god.
"Dear god, it takes so many years for us to create memories,
Hours to cherish them,
Takes one bomb, and few seconds to destroy,
I'm impressed..."
Hope I could write such things happen only in dreams or I could change the climax as Surbhi woke up from her sleep and got relieved as it was just a dream...
Save us god!!!
-Manoj Kumar Desai
Thoughtful.. I m impressed :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumanth :)
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